Good so far.
The wing needs to be shaped differently. Right now it looks like an insect wing. Start at the base of where you want the wing and make a long stretched out squiggly line and add feathers branching out.
You need show me how to colorz!
there is nothing special about this one, the art style is plain and too simple and has no depth...
saz teh krosse
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