Needs a bit more elaboration,but otherwise good structure,and a positively deep meaning

I see, this is a statement about social hierarchy and the strife of the common man.
The shade of orange used here is like the ember of our capitalist superficial ways, but changing.
It's not red, nor is it yellow, but orange. It is in the middle, just like you were as a child in Africa.

'tis a beautiful shade of orange, this is. very orange, very wow. cheers!