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Bad visit to Chumk B Cheems

I would be lying if I said I didn't start as soon as I saw that NG contest was going on 😳

My entry for the Party Contest 2020, baybeee

First bulky drawing of mine uploaded on Newgrounds, hope ya'll liked a short story of how a visit to a restaurant went horribly wrong but then becomes quickly wholesome, feat. my friends' OCs and I!

Alma (tiny ghost) (c) me

Rasty (the rat) (c) @RastyRat (twitter)

Flip (the elf lad) (c) _FlipBox (twitter)

Zerell (the one with two slimes) (c) ZweebArt (on twitter)

Chuck E. Cheese (c) probably Chuck E. Cheese, we don't really have those big cool chain restaurants in my piss poor eastern European country

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Cubesona

2020-08-30 01:14:04

Wooooah, the lack of dialogue, detailed coloring, and care put into the expressions and environment: This definitely deserved the prize! Congrats, and you did an awesome job!

nuclear-smash responds:

Thank you so much! I'm honored to hear this feedback from you, glad you enjoyed this small comic strip entry :D 💜!

mr-johnson22

2020-08-29 19:36:44

Nice job telling a dialogue-free story! The expressions are so wild and colourful that it's a joy to "read" this. But some space between the panels wouldn't hurt; having them interleaved looks cool but makes things a bit cluttered.

nuclear-smash responds:

Thank you very much for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed this short story without text :)
Now that you mentioned it, it does look a bit crowded. Taking notes for next time I'll try to pull something like this again, thank you for the critique!

LucyFuchs

2020-08-26 18:27:36

Really good! Every panel screams a lot of personality. Nice color direction and dynamic shots. There was a considerable amount of effort put into it and it paid off.

nuclear-smash responds:

Aah thank you so much for the kind feedback! I tried my best to make each panel be as dynamic and expressive as possible and I'm glad it paid off :')

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