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My first drawn person

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Oct 26, 2012 | 1:38 PM EDT
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This is the first real person i ever drawn. If you can guess who it is i won't give you anything, but it is fun to watch people guess.
Hint: it is someone from youtube

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MownkeyMownkey

Rated 2 / 5 stars

What "If you can guess i won't give you anything"? Even if there is a reward, what are you going to give?
Anyways... I have no idea who this person is, and the hint "it is someone from youtube" isn't going to help either, because Youtube has billions of active accounts.
Now, let's get to some critique. First of all, you lack most senses of anatomy. I know, you may defend yourself with "but that's my style" <= nah. If you want a style, study anatomy and proportions, because that hand is really small comparing to the head.
Moving on to the lines. The lines look hairy, sketchy and rushed. How about re-doing these with smooth lines? You'll see, it will look a million times better.
One more thing, is that person supposed to be a female or a male? I can tell by the long hair that it may be a girl, but even men have long hair these days so... no difference. I think you're going to make her look female by making her breasts look bigger, don't exaggerate, though. :3
Well that's pretty much it. Cheers, have a nice day.