I am a perv?
But you draw this.
I have never tried to hide the fact that I am a pervert.
"Damn it Alice, I already told you I have a girlfriend, now put ya ass down and get some pants on!"
In all seriousness though, the style and drawing itself looks fine to me. The reason I am giving it a 4.5 and not a 5 is because:
Nothing is perfect and everything can be improved, hence the 4.5.
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