alright cam.. you should've colored the light-pink coloring inside of the hair lineart, i believe. second your sketch lines could've been a bit cleaner, especially the hair section. third, to fix the look of your piece to the eye, the background should've been a more fitting color for viewing-composition instead of MS-Paint's color palette white. lastly it could've potentially used some light shading to better accentuate the form a bit. that's all since ya asked for it : ] i think i've seen this bef-