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3.56 / 5.00

Jun 18, 2009 | 7:28 PM EDT
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This is my first time ever posting my pictures, so please be kind and only post either comments or constructive criticism... Thank you!



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

needs more

the head is to big in my eyes... i know its the anime style and all but thats a tad to big... tone it down a tad... line work is good and shows simple understanding of posture, right arm is a different thickness to the left... if anything it should be thiner and moved further to the right of the page... neaten up them lines... use a pen over the top if you want them bolder... simple cloth folds are nice... try adding a bit of shading to the shadowy areas to bring it out more... and try to do something similar with the hair... it seems all mono toned...