"your intestines and a uterus" the "a" is superfluous, also, it objectify it, which is kind of insulting. Exclude the second exclude please. It is redundant and unnecessary, you are already excluding one thing, there is no need to exclude a second as it is a two for one. "This gel will exclude any possibility of venereal infections as well as any chance of becoming pregnant..." Also, "legs" is not singular, so "was" is wrong. You want to use the plurial "were".
You really need to work on your phrasing, no offense but it is pretty bad. I can help though, if you want me to.
Sure. It would be greate. Just send me PM with all fixes. and i will fix the text
"suddenly I felt how liquid ".. how isn't needed. should be "suddenly I felt some liquid . also "it was felling as if me" me isn't needed. should be " it was feeling as if I was being turned inside out".
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