Very good. I think you're a pretty good draw...er... Drawler? drawlller? drawerler? Whatever it is.
I like the whole winkie shy additude that she kinda looks like she has... but "Watermelon Girl With No Melons"? Really? She's got melons, bro. :D
I give it a ten, for moral apptitude, turpitude, and derpitude. :D