Not bad, but not really too great.
I don't know if you were trying to show a young attractive girl, because I do see that slightly, or an older woman who use to be attractive when she was younger. I do see both and it kind of goes along with the whole mix that you were talking about in your author comments.
The sketchy style gives it a nice touch and changes it up from the regular filled in colors, but at the same time it gives it a sloppy touch. I think the way to make this better would be to zoom in and make the lines cleaner and smaller. This way when viewed at a quick glance it looks neat, but when looked at much closer you can see the detail.
Everywhere that you used the black lines, except for the breasts, seemed to be too thick. Thinning these out would also make it look much cleaner than what you made it look.
Lastly, put the character somewhere. Put a background in to show me where she is and don't just make it any random background. Instead make it something that shows me who the character is as a person.
Oh, by the way... I can't scout you. Only people who are scouted can scout someone else.
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