one major flaw
she is about to commit one of the biggest self-correcting mistakes of her life: Never, ever, ever put anything in path of the slide, ever; it will be cut and/or removed. She might think she is BA, but if she doesn't kill with her first shot, she will be DOA.
But other than that, nice. A unique style that I could get use to.
It's like you took the original, and made it 10x more kawaii
Good work Jesse
Now you shall be my head $wag $ervant 4 lyfe