So this was a cute drawing you have here the black and white style is not bad the background could use some detail but most of all this needs some color the drawing itself is fantastic just some added color would be a plus on things and wouldn't hurt to try a few new ideas and make for some better results
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color including backround
I saw this yesterday, and wondered why the expression seemed so overly enthusiastic it was almost eerie, and I think it has to do with the shading in the face - the lines. That combined with the wide eyes gives the impression she's scared shitless, even though her body otherwise seems to express exhilaration rather than fear. It was an interesting realization. :) A very nice character sketch though!
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