The eyes lack expression as well as the lips- whom are not as the lips of the one whom feasts much.
There should be:
Lips without fat.
Eye filled with hope and love of God.
He must emit energy as if his whole soul is praying, not just his mind.
makes me think of Mastodon's Crack the Skye and the whole Rasputin thing. Good stuff.
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