very nice. your art can use "some" refiment but if this is your thing stick with it it looks funny and i read the second 1 and it was just as good. if this is that best u can do then its great, and from the looks of it it might get much better but i think u can get your own site with u get some more comics pages out and more art (u know like a web comic). over all it has great style and i must say it must say that theres no way your coping something with this. good job.
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