needs more own-style
I don't see any personal style in your drawings but listen: I'm by far worse than you. I just giving my opinion tough, I would like to see some marks that make me notice this is your style. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the response. You certainly don't need to be good at art to critique it, so don't worry on that front. I'm afraid, however, that I don't entirely understand your comment. To me, style is inexorably linked to drawing. A drawing, especially a form as stylized as a cartoon cannot possibly exist without exuding style, but that's simply how I think of it. Perhaps you are trying to say that you find the style bland or cliche. This is a more alarming assertion as it would mean that everything I do is, by its own organic style, bland. Then again, perhaps this drawing is merely simplistic. Either way, I thank you for your feedback and will think about how to improve or respond to such criticism.
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