A lot more goods and than bads
I absolutely love your style, but there were some small details that are throwing me off. My first assessment was the legs being a bit too short, in proportion to the rest of her body. (Who am I, a cartoonist, to criticize proportion control?) And then I noticed that her stomach seems flat while her hips were clearly turned. I don't wanna nit pick at your work, but these are just things that I thought were thwarting perfection. Keep up the good work!