Table Games (draft 1)

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Table Games (draft 1)

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A first draft of an illustration I'm working on.

I'm planning to do a second, more focused version of this idea, so I'd love any feedback on what I have so far.

Any feed back would be fantastic. But i also have a few particular questions I'm curious about:
What do you think is going on in the scene?
Where do you think this scene is taking place?
What are the biggest composition issues?
What are the biggest proportion or point perspective issues?

Thanks so much for the help!


I'm guessing it's kinda a dream or maybe a purgatory like thing that's going on. Is this taking place on a desk? If so,maybe you could line it up with the wall a little more. However, if you're going for a surreal look,this is pretty good. The angle of the light is perfect,and I really like the almost Looney Tuneslike look of this(in fact,when at first glance,I actually thought the clown guy was a twisted Elmer Fudd) . Some of the angles are little off(like the table/desk),but like I said,if you are going for unreal,dreamlike thing,the angles add to it. All in all,I think it looks good,really like the creepy circus theme,am guessing there's something to do with FNAF by the posters,and can't wait to see it finished and what you really planned for this to be.

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Apr 30, 2017 | 5:27 PM EDT
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