Not bad at all.
Maybe it's the style of the hair, but in think that the head looks a bit large in comparison the rest of the body. Also, her legs are drawn a bit awkwardly, and one breast is larger than the other. The shading of the body could also use some work. Try to envision light sources actually casting shadows and shading where they would fall.
Thank you. My head is probably too large because that is how I usually draw, but I was going for realism so it should probably be smaller. As for the breast and the legs, I was trying to make them look 'imperfect' because the human body is more often than not less than perfect. Thanks again for noticing and pointing it out though, it's still constructive help. I also need to work on my lighting, I usually just draw and never bother giving it a light source. That is something I need to work on.
I like it! The proportions look good!
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