colorful and awesome
colorful and awesome
Some nice experimentation in this piece! The thing I want to nitpick are the hands, arms, and the facial expressions. I noticed that sometimes you draw characters with bug eyes and I think you're able to make really expressive expressions, but sometimes it looks uncanny to me. Lum's head doesn't really flow with the body and is overall, flat. I think the entire pose could also be stronger and exaggerated. I like the poses of the people in the back through. It's good, just more room for improvement!
Thank you for the feedback. I'll admit that I'm a bit rusty since I've been taking time off since dr rock but I'll definitely practice my foreshortening. I def shouldve refined the sketch a bit more.
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