What a great picture! I admit that the only reason I don't like this more is because Girlchan In Paradise is one of my least favorite cartoons from Egoraptor This is still wonderful. Yeah, boob movement! You really did catch these spot on. There's Daily awards for pictures?
I even like the white outline. It's weird because maybe it should have been more like your own. It's still a great piece of art. I've forgotten all of these characters' names except Girlchan. Wouldn't you know it?