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2.17 / 5.00

Mar 31, 2016 | 1:25 AM EDT
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3036 x 3054 px
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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

If you are wondering the likely reason for such a low score on this artwork it has to do with a poor grasp of visual aesthetic. Her eyes are looking opposite directions, her nose is too far up her face and crooked, her jawline is asymmetrical , youve overdefined certain parts of her features, such as the anatomy of the neck and collarbone and the little divot under the nose. these things should not be defined with dark straight lines but implied with color or careful use of line width. This is a delicate woman you are trying to show us here, not a super skinny malnourished person, there's no reason for these things to be so heavily defined. Aside from the lack of visual aesthetic here, theres severe problems with the construction of this figure, the lack of depth and anatomy is very apparent and detracts from the image alot. Art is a struggle, I hope my critique helps you be a better artist and doesnt discourage you from trying harder next time.

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Midget-Ninja responds:

Totally agree with you! they are all things that bothered me about the piece too. I'm still learning and hope that I am improving with each new drawing. I have redrawn the picture with the suggestions you offered if you want to take a look. And thank you for the review! :)