I can tell you've put in a lot of effort here, really impressive :) Not only is the composition of this piece appropriate, it's also stunningly clever and well thought out! The eye is led exactly as you want it to be, and visual interest is strong throughout, with a good balance of perspective and detail. The painting is goo quality but I feel your linework is a little lacking, only slightly, i think a picture of this style could benefit from a nice thick black outline around the outer most edges of the image. That aside, you've done well, keep up the great work and improvement and thanks for sharing :)