OK! I think i will intervene this time!

@Anonymous-Frog may be right about story being simple, but that doesnt mean its bad! It's humorous in fact!

His art take is completely wrong though!!! there is nothing crude about these faces and limbs, they are simple and sleek! if you want to see crude linework you can visit either mine or Frog's gallery! Also drawing from life? This is a good tip in general, but i don't think it can be applied to the style of object show!

I hope you'll get successful with your series and won't let chumps like Anon Frog let you down!

Also "Can’t wait what you’ll end up with in 3 years.", I think you missed a word in that sentence! It is a minor mistake anyone can make though, don't feel bad for making it!

Story: Very simple. Nothing to write home about

Art: Massive dealbreaker. Looks like an old case of ‘objectshowitis’. Each character is a geometric shape with crude face and stick limbs, and quick lines for eyes. Drawing from life can definitely help, even if you still aim to keep things cartoony.

Final verdict: You have a very powerful animation tool on your hands, Adobe Flash. People used to make TV shows with this, before Toon Boom anyway. There’s practically a massive potential to be had with this software. Can’t wait what you’ll end up with in 3 years.

that moment when i accidentally find an object show nerd like me