So good. I like the animation so far. I hope to see the complete animation!

So cute, I really like it.

I was really confused for a minute, but nowww I think I know what it means. It's really cool when something as simple as a storyboard forces me to think.

As for the art, I really really like the style. It's something I haven't seen much of. It's got this sharper style to it that does a really good job at being scary or cute when it wants to. That aspect of it was used very well in this storyboard. As for critique, it's only a story board, so I can't really complain that it doesn't look entirely finished. So, all I can say is, awesome job!

Also, pretty cool that you and your girlfriend connect through art and are actually animating this. Couples like that make me jealous.