Does the character's name who this is not supposed to look like perhaps begin with the letter T?
The head and face are well done. The shoulders may be a bit too broad, but preference definitely plays a role in that area. Also, at the angle he is standing, I believe his right arm would be in front of his torso.
The eyes seem to be shaded well. :)
^^...no...It's Ryoma Echizen from Prince of Tennis.
Thank you. I have lost words to compliment your critique mind.
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