You didn't color in all of the face, and the eyes aren't perfectly aligned.
i'll have to agree with fluffkomix. this sucks. try actually putting effort into it.
my dinner is popping our from this picture.
seriously this isn't very good at all. no textures, no background, simplistic drawing, no shading, etc.
try using all of these things.
This artist has not been scouted yet.
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