I somewhat agree with the other comment you got but I also love the subtleness of the expression as it fits with her almost being erased out of reality. There is a concern, yet hopeful, glare in her eyes. I like it. The art style is also really neat and I just learned a neat way of dealing with covered breasts by looking at how you did it!
Some critiscm then. FIrst, I'd wish that the lines on the shirt had been as neat as in the face even though this had taken some of the focus from the face. Additionally I wish that you'd skipped the glare in the headphones as the color of it does not match the rest of the piece. The bright yellow there is too strong. Otherwise a really nice, artistic, piece. :)
HI. Im begginer, i just started drawing 1 year ago +-. Thanks for constructive criticism.
Really good colours and composition, however the lines could be neater and personally I'd prefer more emotion in the piece. Nice use of background tho :)
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