The thing about dark lines is they demand detail, which I believe you could do. As far as animation go's I'm not gonna judge you for that because, this isn't animated. Still nice though.
I feel it needed some more shadows or at least some way to get an overall darker tone
This is rad man, really. The hues are so close together yet perfectly contrasted. And the dark lines brings in a really cool cartoony style. I dig it man.
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