HMMM! You know, each time I try inking something just a little different I seem to either place to much weight to the lines or not enough, its always so tricky for me, It would prolly come out a lot better (likewise) If I could manage to hold a brush steady instead of having to rely on pens, out of curiousness, where would you add some weight to in this? (is just happy he is getting a little crit instead of blind phrase atm)