You did a great job on the overall shape and shading, but there are a few parts that seem wrong to me. The hip on the left side doesn't look like it comes out enough and I can see like lines on the stomach, some of which look like they were part of the original sketch outline (like on the stomach). Also, the shading on the legs and left arm look like squiggly lines. Still, I like the overall drawing (you drew the face very well and the pose is also good).
Thanks for the detailed review. About squiggly lines: I try to keep my work close to realism but don't want it to become photographic copy... so I want you to see it as a drawing... hence the shade outline on the stomach was erased originally, but I added it back in. On the other hand, if it's bothering you, I probably did not get it right enough to get the feeling of drawing across...
I'll take note of your comments and be sure to watch for them in future work.
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