i love your style, very bold and eye-catching. the color scheme is well thought out and the girl's pose is dynamic and attractive, sexy even. however, i agree with snicksyfoo, her breasts appear to be too far down, but not as much as he/she said. just a bit, i wouldn't have noticed it if no one else had mentioned it. also, her feet look weird. the large bulb shape in the body of the foot above the toes looks strange, like her feet are swollen. at first glance, this is the only thing that made me think, "Whoa, what's up with that?" other than that, i really like the exaggerated style. fine work.