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2.00 / 5.00

Mar 24, 2010 | 12:41 PM EDT
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582 x 447 px
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schroogys freind



Rated 2 / 5 stars

Hello there

Hi, if you really want to improve your art then you should try to make the colors blend a little. For example the grass with the 4 shades of green is very noticeable. Try to make it less obvious and you should see some improvement. Hope this helps :)


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Keep practicing

It just looks really rough. Your lines are pretty sketchy and inconsistent.
Point to note on skies, next time it's a nice blue sky out, take a look and you'll see the lighter colours are at the bottom. Just a simple tip ;)

For the blob character, the grey is a really boring colour choice. And it should look a little more blob like rather than just wrinkled where he's touching ground.

Note on your response to kirbyfighter12's review.
He was giving advice. You aren't going to make any friends here if you treat people poorly.
"while your stupid"
"Well, you're stupid."
Well, not while. You're for you are.

lgnxhll responds:

ill try to improve

i was kinddind with the childish insults


Rated 3 / 5 stars


cool and I hope to see more of this guy but a more detailed background would be nice, but who am I to say that :P

lgnxhll responds:

thx again :p


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

please work on your outlines

it looks incredibly thrown together....

the anatomy is fine,

the shading is also ok

its just really average :/

keep workin :)

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lgnxhll responds:

ill work on it


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

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1, the boarders are inconsistent,
2. No shadows on the ground from the characters
3. the edges arent refined.

It just looks like you made it just to submit it :|

lgnxhll responds:

while your stupid