Nice work

Well this was pretty cool, I like the comic style of this and you have some nice character work and very colorful, the pink text is ok but I think you should have all the text in a bubble not just some, anyways nice work here with this comic style and I look forward to more soon.

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the pink text is ok but I think you should have all the text in a bubble not just some

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Straight into the action, huh! The pink captions could use some enforcing background or other color, and the speech bubbles could use some darker color. NIce idea having gender-specific text, but the pink is a bit bright. How many pages will this span? Keep it going!

-cd-