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So another picture for you people to vote, comment and well... i dont know what do really... but anway... my first adult rated picture... *woot*... now as allways... i dont want silly comments saying *omg boobs!* beacuse thats not going to help me improve... if you see anything wrong with it... pm me or leave a comment... so far i want to work on the face a bit more and possibly add a few more details... as for the background... its a sneak peak of my sketch book tour piece... so there :P...

so... what do you think?

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*omg boobs!*

See if you can please edit this, the breast are too low... rest looks great though.

LegolaSS responds:

to be honest, this is A: really old, B: done in flash mx, C: i no longer have the file and D: i really cant be bothered to rework this rubbish. also the breasts are too low?... how many girls have you seen and if you say "lots on the internet" try looking at the real world

I like the concept and drawing in general, but you could work on the lining.
It looks a bit rough too rough, maybe try to experiment with line thickness or something.
Like make the lines smaller where there's allot of detail and make them bigger where there's not allot of detail. you could try enabling pressure size to make dem smooth looking lines, naw mean?

Looks nice overall, but I honestly think the right shuri-boob looks messed up on the "shuri" part.


Credits & Info

3.74 / 5.00

Sep 26, 2009
10:36 AM EDT
Fine Art
File Info
1167 x 1079 px
136.4 KB

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