See if you can please edit this, the breast are too low... rest looks great though.
to be honest, this is A: really old, B: done in flash mx, C: i no longer have the file and D: i really cant be bothered to rework this rubbish. also the breasts are too low?... how many girls have you seen and if you say "lots on the internet" try looking at the real world
I like the concept and drawing in general, but you could work on the lining.
It looks a bit rough too rough, maybe try to experiment with line thickness or something.
Like make the lines smaller where there's allot of detail and make them bigger where there's not allot of detail. you could try enabling pressure size to make dem smooth looking lines, naw mean?
Looks nice overall, but I honestly think the right shuri-boob looks messed up on the "shuri" part.
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