That other guy already mentioned the chin and stuff. I'll mention the eyeballs. Reverse your drawings horizontally to see what I'm talking about. From what I see though, its just this drawing of yours.
Shading is nice.
Chin and Fireball
Looks pretty good! I like how the composition is very nice and smooth. Everything flows together well. Good choice of colors as well! The two things I advise working on though are: the chin, it looks like it got lost in her shirt. Like maybe she has it tucked in it? And the fire ball is nice, but judging from the rest of this piece (this is a compliment of how awesome this looks), you could push it a little more with a couple colors and make it more interesting by changing up the shape a bit. Both other than that, looks great! Can't wait to see more of your work!
Thanks for the advices :D I made the corrections. ;)
Advice to you?
...Hah! I wanna hear advice -from- you dude, this is brilliant! :D
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