Love your use of perspective, but I'd definitely love to see a little bit more drama or context in here. Looking forward to the novel!
Sadly, the kickstarter flopped a while ago. This was just a background for an animatic. I guess I should have said both of those things.
I don't know what's going to happen to the novel. I haven't asked the author, but I believe he's pushing it out to publishers. I'm currently off that project.