Pretty good stuff. Gave a 4. Your coloration is good, as is the style, but I feel the presentation could be just a liiiiittle better. The subject matter is sort of overwhelmed by text. I would recommend downsizing the text in proportion. After all, it isn't a tiny image.
I love how just about all your dislikes revolve around the hot-ass weather though. Literally me. Except I hate cold weather because at least with hot weather, the breeze feels nice and I can sometimes go outside without dying, lmao. Keep up the good work!
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