A little ...
You're a little better
it has to be more sharper than this.
Clean look, soft overtone.
The line work of the character is pretty clean, and the way you applied colors give her a very soft, glowing, almost entrancing appearance.
My problems with the drawing however, comes from a few different areas. I'm sure you were going for a cute and simple design, but the lack of a background, or at least a background color, make me lose interest from the overall drawing very quickly.
Also, I feel you could have done a bit more with the actual colors. The flat palette of pink hues and gradients look good to a certain extent, but don't really make anything "pop". Her blue eye is perhaps the only thing that keeps me focused on the character. I feel like it would add much more contrast and focal interest in the drawing if you made both eyes the same blue color.
Overall, I actually really like the way she turned out. She comes across as so... hypnotizing. Great work!
Checked it ?
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