Have you ever seen the notorious CD Zelda games? The ones with those AWFUL cutscenes? Well that's what I see when I look at this, it all looks so child drawn, its a grotesque art piece, I have to say that. But, I must give Frocangue a fair rating, so here I go: the lighting is spot on, bringing depth to this... thing. As far as detail goes, well, your suction cups are at times not on the tentacle¹ or are less circular and more square². Here and there you notice a lack of color look at notes ³ and ⁴. The teeth are in someways uneven but otherwise fearsome, and the head is very detailed and beautifuly textured. Considering.
NOTES: 1: third tentacle with visable suction cups (from left to right) has two that are peeking off the tentacle. 2: tentacle on far right appears to two square suction cups on the bottom row. 3: far left, between the two off screen tentacles. 4: far right tentacle third row suction cup appears to be uncolored towards the top. Ty for reading this and also, good job on the back story! An original character with their own lore is so rare!