...to see the finished print manga! Awesome Project!
Those characters give some good impression and expectations are rising!
The characters feel really vivid and you can almost feel that behind every character there is some cool background story! Respect! Keep on the good work!
I'm really Glad these characters evoque you something. It's been a long time since they evolved slowlly throught this years. Got to say the pink dudes are some new add but me and my cowriter we will try to fullfill those spectations.
thnx for the nice comment feel cool to mark any thing that could be done better. But well from now on the hard part will be to maintain the style and do a good narrative, because no story no feeling.
I like the way that you've got a lot of poses sorted out for these characters and that they aren't all doing the same thing, giving the impression of being staged - it looks like a photo montage, which really does do the trick for advertising hoardings, or video game cover art, for example.
Perhaps a little more could be done with the background, but I do understand that you've got a kind of minimalist attitude with things like that, which stems from the artistic style itself. Still, a few pieces of "furniture" in there could make all the difference. I notice that only one of the characters is armed - there aren't even knuckle dusters on the other characters, which does detract a little, but bear in mind that this isn't exactly ruining the piece itself, so credit does go there nicely.
Perhaps make it into a proper advert, with the detailed writing across the bottom, some sort of age-defining icon for legal purposes and so forth, just to complete the look.
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Yea i first thought about doing some background, maybe the HisgSchool Building With no real perspective just iconic presence. About the Wepons, maybe the result was kinda battle royale, but i wanted to make a more generic not just fighting in the story. In fact the comic main characters don't fight to much directly (at least on my first adventure) but maybe this composition and proportion of fighter characters give an unfullfilled battle shoot. I should be more sensible about those details and overall sensations.
Cool ideas for the finishing look, soemtimes i run out of detail ideas to give that pro finishing touch, expereince and good feedback should make me learn too do it.
Thnks for such review Coop
Love all the poses alot of movement!
Thnxs Shad ^^
Y'know what do those pink jackets mean, don't you?
...That you've entered THE FRAT BOYS' turf!
This one does the job of building expectation just fine...
... I just love BANCHO BATTLES!!!
Youre a fast turf arent you Bizarro ; )
And i even didn't use a Boob scoop on the thumbnail.
I'm impressed ^^
: D and pleased
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