its not bad
you are well on ur way to being outstanding. just pay more attention to creating good anatomy and practice drawing the body from different angles to get this kind of shot looking even better. as always, tho it is a sketch, try cleaner lines and more definition on the clothing and feet/ hands. Specifically, the girl's arms are too small and dont liik like they are attached correctly. Still a good piece and please make more!! Please check out my stuff also and scout !! : )
The arm appears short because it's tilted in towards the guy, because her hand is on his chest.
I guess I failed making it obvious.
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