Sexy proportions, and perspective.
I wouldn't worry - as ruuse542 does - about the girl being cross-eyed. (The guy on the right is the same, incidentally - bet you weren't looking at him ;) ) She's clearly drunk/stoned and/or either in the middle of an orgy, relaxing from an orgy or else mad keen for a gang bang she's about to have. Why wouldn't she be cross-eyed!
Two little things ... I might expect her nipples to be slightly higher up, esp since her breasts have a bit of support from the water in the pool. Not that this makes her any less voluptuous, or "fanciable" ....
The guy on the right (since my eyes did stray from her for a second) has what looks like an enormously meaty member. So might mine, in his position (unless it's an "after" scene - nothing lasts for ever). But I suppose th eway it looks as if his cock, alien-like, is distended so far as to take over his whole abdomen is the artistic licence of drawing - representing how it feels for him, rather than strict objective "photographic evidence".
The guy on the left looks like he's firing his load at her from a great distance - what a waste! Patience, my boy, patience!
Finally, a question, or two: the game is getting very big, and complex. I'm worried it's getting unwieldy, and might become one of those games that needs 2 days to play :-O .... the earlier versions had a small satisfying simplicity to them, incomplete and shorter on content as they were. So, questions:
1) Do you have any plans for a "light version" of the game. One that could take 10-15 minutes?
2) Graphics such as this new one - and others (especially featuring buxom naked and available females in promising scenes or hard at work - I am biased) seem to me well worth little story strips of their own. This new one in particular could be part of a particularly artistic but also extremely sexy pictures-only strip. Have you any plans to produce spin-off graphic stories?
I always enjoy your reviews and apreciate your comments ^^
About the questions:
1) Almost sure we are not doing a light version, although we are going to split the game in chapter for the online version. We got a couple of games planed that could be shorter but we'll probably wait until finish this one.
2) We would love to make comics about little storys of Elana's island. We also have one started and a couple planed, but we don't have time U_U Someday
I love that game :3
Glad you like it ^^
Awesome, but the chick looks extremely cross-eyed.
Her gaze is a genetic trait... It tell us that she evolved as a predator.
Now siriously, you are right. it seems I'm unable to see things like this when I spend a lot hours drawing...
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