I can tell there is meant to be a swing, yes. But it does look like it's not swinging hard enough.
Everything else is great, and love the Backstory. =3
I think that way too, the swing doesn't have enough power. Glad you liked it though!
Woah this looks great. Very dynamic, love it
great stuff :D the picture didn't really have much to do with the description do, which was a let down, wudv worked betr if this piece was with a description of 'happy days of childhood spent learning from his father' or something and u had him meeting the girl or someting other than that its really gud, gotta say do, the description won more points than the picture for me :)
This was actually supposed to be a short animation that I may do in the future, hence the picture just shows one of the scenes from the narration.