i like the pose =] your art style is yours, dont take people's shit. Could use improvement thought so i give it a 3.5
I have read the other reviews that you have got for this piece and there are quite a few good points being given. So much so in fact that I'm finding it hard to think of something to say about the piece that isn't mentioned right below me. If I were you I'd take as much help as Absinthe is willing to offer you.
The first thing that jumped out at me when I saw the piece was her knees. They look kinda out of shape, almost painful to look at. Also her left leg appears to be slightly bigger at the thigh and calf to me.
I did note that nobody has mentioned what they like about the piece, so here we go: The hands are great, I really struggle with them myself but I think you've mastered them here. The hair is also shaded and shaped perfectly for a cartoon of this style.
Keep trying to improve and I'm sure you will eventually.
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I don't need to hope you never become a graphics designer or whatever the fuck you want to be in art, because it's obvious that at age 21-ish, unwilling to change your techniques (not even trying to change the way you hold a fucking pencil), and your immature mantrums combined with your sickeningly sheltered attitude will never ever get even a serious look at your future portfolio. lol. I mean, I've been following you over two years now and you've never changed not even once. haha. you're a lost cause. just get a 9 to 5 job sitting in a cubicle or photoshopping porn genitalia because you have no motivation, no drive, no desire to improve in...shit, just about anything really.
Wow...abusive as always. Why not pay attention to my thread and look at my recent efforts?
Alright I'm back, and allow to me to say that it's insulting both morally and professionally to inquire someone to go into more detail about something regardless of circumstance.
Her overall form looks really forced with her right breast defying gravity, her breasts are not soft or appealing with there usually anatomically incorrect fashion, and her torso seems like a template from your other drawings. I mean this drawing just seems kind of shitty because it has no purpose aside from having a derpy chick pose in the motherfucking wasteland.
I'm back home for spring break after taking 5 exams and a lab practical involving a fetal pig, this means I can actually sit down with you over skype and beat some anatomical sense into your thick skull.
You learn how to draw reality so you can dumb it down to a style you want. You can't run before you learn how to crawl.
Thanks for your feedback, but I'm still making my web comic whether you like it or not.
Is she like Mr. Fantastic? Her lines suggest that.
Also, her breasts look funny in that outfit.
You may have wanted to be more thorough than that, sir.
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