I'm not going to say much..
because I suck at writing, but you say she doesen't like girly stuff (or the color pink which I can relate) but...then why is she wearing 2 bows and a short skirt?
Eh, she just kinda puts up with the skirt and stuff 'cuz its her uniform. Kinda like how Haruka Tenoh (Sailor Uranus) is very tomboyish and usually wears only boy's clothes, yet she still wears the traditional Sailor Senshi uniform when she transforms. ^_^
Just my way of thinking, anyway...
But it's lacking a bit of shape to me, primarily on her rib cage and neck if you ask me. It's need a slight curve to so she doesn't look like a board.
Also it missing some shading on the dog's (wolf's) head it looks flat compared to the rest of the body.
Also I'm not too crazy about the gradients on the text.
And the background is too dark around the bottom... I think I'd look better if the flame were in front of them and faded up.
Those are my thoughts but other than that I think it looks good.
First and foremost, thank you very much for taking the time to review my picture! Much appreciated. ^_^
Now, as for your comments: I think understand what you're saying. I'll try to fix that, but to be honest, the Sailor Scouts' torsos usually aren't defined anymore than how I have it now, (at least, not that I've ever seen) so I'm not sure what more needs to be done.
I'll work on the shading on the wolf's head, but again I'm not really sure where it needs more shading, so... we'll see what happens, lol.
The text... eh, I wasn't crazy-happy with it either, so it'll probably get tweaked sometime.
While I kinda agree about the background being a bit dark at the bottom, I'd rather not put the flames in front of them. I want the focus to be on the characters, after all, not the background, which is why it's faded the way it is. =P Just my way of thinking, though.
Thank you again for the comment, I really do appreciate the constructive criticism and I'm glad you like the picture! =D
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