Haha
Well this was kind of funny I think there's too much hair on the legs though but you have some nice detail and the dress was funny as hell so nice job very colorful and a full picture of art indeed so nice job here. It was entertaining
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it's perfect as is
~X~
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I need more whiskey for this...
No, really I do...
OK time for me to join the rest of the whores on the street, but in a different fashion.
As with most other whores in the business, I have my reasons for being here. Some want money, some want pleasure, others want pain, I want fame. I want to get to the top of the Art Reviewers list, and you guys are going to help me get there.
: hey everyone needs some one to step on, right?
So here it is, Im going to become a review whore. You guys bring me art, Ill review it.
Simple enough, but there are some rules, you know, like some Asian chicks have a no tentacle rule.
Rules:
~I wont be reviewing in the thread. When you want something reviewed you Post the picture using the include picture box, and include a link to the picture in the portal. I will not hunt down your profile, I will not hunt down the picture. Ill make a post replying to people when I have reviewed their pieces.
~If you want more than one picture reviewed, you must make a new post.
~I dont care if you are scouted or not, if its in the portal, Ill review it. Im not picky about my customers.
~I will be taking on 5 customers a day. If I choose to do more, then great, if not well, there is always tomorrow.
~I dont deal in hot goods. If I know the stuff is stolen, then I wont review it, but I will report it. Im sure the fuzz (mods) are already annoyed that I tend to have them on speed dial.
~Im only doing art reviews as a result of this, So dont ask about reviewing flash or audio or anything.
Those who know me, know Im pretty rough. So if your afraid of having a bruised ego, then Im not the whore for you. Regardless of me being harsh, I do try to give a solid review.
So what do you say you got a nickel to ride this Beast!
Review Whore
~Aka Kinsei
Link to thread :
http://www.newgrounds.com /bbs/topic/1222103
Why do I have a very strong feeling, this is in direct context, How you look when you start working on your art? Drunk, Unimpressed, In a Dress with a perky 5 O'clock to boot. I hope your married, if not, Im all over dat ass.
(totally kidding...thought id tamper to find out where We draw the line in this relationship.) (luls)
I'm reviewing you...
>:)
Anyways, it is looking good all around. The new inking is working out for you, regardless of my dislike of the procedure. Just a few things:
~I think you could use some work around the shoulder. It looks kinda pinned to the torso, instead of one continuous extension, y'know? Also, unless you shaved, there should be some armpit hair there amirite?
~On the face, I like what you did with the facial hair, but between the nose and lip there seems to be a protrusion which (at least on my face) is nonexistent.
~The fingers seem to be varying thicknesses (I mean, look at how big that middle finger is! Has it been working out?)
~The way you colored the hair on the legs, arms, and chest is a bit weird. It is the same as the way it was colored on the face, but it doesn't look good. Are you using a brush? It looks like it, and it makes it looks repetitive and unimaginative. When I drar hair, I draw it line by line. The result is much more satisfying. The time and detail you put into your work will really pay off in the end. There are no shortcuts!
~The bow on his head is also a little wonky, since its pinned on at the very edge of his hair. it should be closer to his ear, imo.
~Play around more with colors and contrast. It all seems pretty flat, but it still does its purpose. It would really pop with some deeper shadows, I think.
On the other hand, I really like the booze. Nice job!
I also like how you made the purse match the shoes. Even whores have SOME fashion sense! xD
The purse and shoes aside, I like how you made the whole outfit mismatched. It really adds to the whore-feel.
So there are a few things you could fix up, sure. But overall, I do like it!
I hope I wasn't too harsh Kinsei, and if I wa, sorry :3
Good job!
Kinsei responds:
lol The more mismatched and tacky I made the outfit, the more I liked it.
With the "pined arm," yeah I have no clue what I was thinking. That should have registered much differently to me, I'm not sure why it didn't.
The hair, yeah I wanted to get a slight dirty look with the hair, so thats kind of why it has some color variation in some areas. but in retrospect, It could have come out alot more even.
Also with the hair, I build a custom brush a specific purpose a couple projects ago, and I know there are no shortcuts, I went ahead and used it again. In some areas, it worked, in others it didn't. I should have layered more, but again I didn't. There is no excuse for my laziness.
I would love to discuss more about what you don't like about the inking procedure you don't like. Fire me a PM. I've been trying to get feed back on it.
Anyway that wasn't harsh, If anything you could have been much meaner and bitch about the lighting being off on one of the bottles or how I just noticed that I forgot to shade the socks.... or....
you know.... I better shut up >.>....
Interesting
Although you did great detail and all. Why is the guy wearing a dress and holding a purse? The detailings look nice and I guess the whiskey could explain why he has a dress on but what events lead to him putting on the dress in the first place? Shading was a plus as well, looks pretty cool anyways.
Nice and weird piece of art I guess.
Kinsei responds:
Thanks man, The piece is actually for a thread I started over in the art forum. Me being a review whore. so the dress, which looks kind of tacky to begin with anyway does sort of make sense.
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