Kind of agree with the person below. Even though your mature art is good too (especially for beginners who need an anatomy lesson), it's nice to see something "mostly" E-rated.
Definitely a good drawing but the only problem with it is the skimpy clothing which as the other person post will make people say " OMG TAK HR CLTHZ OFFZ" just say that maybe you should me the shorts look more like shorts and less like a belt, other than that I feel like you did a rather great job on your art.
this is great,but the only thing people are gonna say bout it is "take her clothes of" see were im getting
that can be arranged.