sucks that you dropped the project
i was about to give you numerous tips about the character development but oh well... good art, did well on making them look like dragonball characters....
Well, that's the thing about heroes....
You never know who they'll be and how they will dress. Look at Luke Cage. Leader of the Avengers, defender of the streets, where's a wife beater, jeans, and sneakers! Lol! Seriously though, I'm feeling a lot of your work and I plan on reviewing the rest of them too because now, you've just become my favorite artists. Nice job my man and I hope you get to check some of my stuff out sometimes. Other than that, you get another 10 & a 5. Well done!
You know what I think? :0
I like the colors, but not the character design ;)
Neither of them don't seem be "hero" material to me... like Son Goku.
That's probably because they're "hero material" like Krillin and Yamcha... They're not the main characters...
You got the style --of the original DB artists-style-- well. Although the purple-haired girl looks way too similiar to Bulma (I know its the style, but still). Just saying. Keep it up.
Thanks, but there's no "but still"
Lucca looks almost exactly like Bulma... and Crono like Tapion, and Ayla like Android 18, and Magus like Vegeta, and so on, and so on. I fact, any face I'd give her would make her look like another Toriyama character
pretty neat stuff.
I like it. the story line isn't half bad either. I'm taking that your making a series?
That was the plan, but unfortunately it ended up on the "ballooned out of my control and subsequently abandonded" heap of projects...