I personally didn't find this to be great. At least it's still a good drawing! I do appreciate how the style is unique. I think it would have been better if you had showed off more characters. There really is an interesting cast in that series. Then again, I can't remember their names.
It's great to see Girlchan in even skimpier clothes. Hey, bikinis are quite deserving of this website! The weird thing was that she does seem a bit too skinny. She should be a bit more spread out. It's still a good picture.