non constructive comment: looks cool :D
constructive comment: i like the effects on the leather and the figure of the character is spot on. the 2 things i'd redo (or at least work on) would be the eyes and the daggers. the eyes look a bit odd and make her look a bit crosseyed. the daggers look like toys x.x they dont look sharp at all, when in reallity you can and have done better.
all in all, it's really good and im glad to see you experimenting with other body types, but you can do much better. keep up the good work, my friend ;D